Wednesday, November 7, 2012

In my room


I don’t have refrigerator in my room, so I don’t have raw food, ice cream and frozen food. However I have a few food in my room. There are package of rice, a box of curry, box of ramen, a little chocolate, and bottle of water and cocoa in my room.  
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  1. Josh RosenbergerDecember 1, 2012 at 4:41 AM

    It sounds like you have all that you need!

    Here are some grammar errors to look at:

    1. few food-->little food or "I don't have much food."
    2. "a" box of ramen/"a" bottle of water

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